On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action.I think my story is.... about a 8/10
To improve my writing next time I will.... Use more adjectives and details.
Please comment on the good features of your story Mackenzie eg the great use of adjectives and illiteration eg: "silky, slimy, scaly snapper" Fantastic writing.
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